Comments : A LIFE YOU CANT TAKE...

  • 16 years ago

    by panicked life

    I used to relate to this poem. That used to be my life but trust me, if you put your mind to it, you can stop. Have faith in yourself.

  • 16 years ago

    by CrossCut

    This poem is asolutely amazing. to me. I can relate to this poem becuase I have felt this exact way. Kudos. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    Good job, nice poem, nice poet, keep up the good work, perfecly spoken, and perfectly wrote,

    [~lacie~] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, great job
    It's very well written
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This poem really blew me away, i really really liked it. It really flows well and the message behind it is very solid. Nice work just hope you could forget some of your pain and be happy. Good work, really loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow this is one amazing poem. serioously i lovve it. take a look at my poem and tell me what u think but a 5/5 for ur poem i rly rly loved it