Decent poem, I liked it lots. Keep up the writting soI have somthing to do here at the hospital. lol

Decent poem, I liked it lots. Keep up the writting soI have somthing to do here at the hospital. lol

Jayjay
What a sad poem.

You lied;
I"ll never trust again
My tears stain my heart!

The sad heartbreak of young love.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

I actually adore this poem.
tis in my faves now =)
wow
u r amazing

This is an amazing poem full of emotion.great job!5/5
**lesthat

Awww...this is so sad...yet so beautiful. idk y but i love it. heart break is so tragic yet beautiful when put in words. makes for a beatiful poem, i love it. great job

GREAT ONE, you´re truly had a good sense in writing. GREAT. and thanks for your comments. GOD bless you.

GREAT ONE, you´re truly had a good sense in writing. GREAT. and thanks for your comments. GOD bless you.