Nice poem full of emotions, i categorically like the way you ended it. Nice work and hope God unites the two of you.

Good 2 c someone writing sonnets..... N I m a sonnet lover n I remember long back reading Shadow Sonnet that I liked d most, but cant remember as to who wrote,,

Lovely form of poetry this one is n shakesphere loved writing this form of poetry a lotz...

So keep writing.. n best wishz..

(Karan)