by RavishingEruption Apr 17, 2008
category :
Special events /
other poems
He reaches in his pocket |
by H E Losey
A nice write with a good story line, though the rhythm/metre is off in spots too many syllables/words. Some of the rhymes are a bit off ie. stanzas 2,3,&4. I did enjoy the read. As always an opinion. |
by shadowknight
Awe! |