LMAO. That was so very funny, it actually made me laugh. I really don't like critiquing funny poems, because I know the person who wrote it had fun writing it and really that's all that matters. Hehe. This poem just makes me want to scream "weeeeeeeeeeee".

Amazingly awesome funny poem! :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce

WOWSERS that was a good poem because it made me laugh lol hehe as i alwayz say!!!