by Bugg Apr 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I was me and you were you |
Beautiful poem. |
I can really relate to this. My friend didn't commit suicide, but he did move very far away without even telling me we were going. We'd been best friends for three years, so the hurt ran pretty deep. Obviously, since I've never had anyone close to me commit suicide, I really don't know what you went through/are going through. It was an excellent poem. 5/5 |
I'm really sorry, I swear I'm not a mean person, but all your poems are nothing but the same as every other want-to-be-writer. |
It's really sad and touching poem...I loved it... |
by BREEawNUHH
Wow. This poem is very emotional and heartfelt. I thought you did a wonderful job writing about this person who you've lost. It almost brought me to tears -- not because it was about someone passing, as is typical, but it was the feelings you showed for this person, and how much they meant to you. It's not easy to write about losing someone who was so special to you; I know. This poem is beautiful. I loved it, 100%. |