Higher Love

by Mr. Darcy   Apr 17, 2008


You speak to me a language
My ears don't understand.
Orating pure emotion,
a lyrical wonderland.

Every syllable a mystery,
Constructed in the stars.
Ears can't comprehend
Spanish strummed guitars.

Intricate vibrations
Translated to my soul
Extremities unnecessary
My heart is your control.

A message so profound,
My mind can clearly hear.
Every sentimental notion,
Brings me crystal tears.

Distance is no consequence
When your music is with me.
Synchronising, yet defining
A higher love is always free.

Your vision hot hypnotic
Viewed on the silver screen.
I'm a slave to your passion
Oh, the words I yearn to scream.

She speaks a perfect riddle
To excite my inner core
Teasing thoughts within me
My mind is craving more!

So kiss me, mortal angel
Cement your words so true
Penetrate my every dream,
Blissful life of me and you.

Sing with me forever
Oh Lady grant this wish
Stand me in your heaven
Lets dance our endless kiss.

M. Moran
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15.04.08
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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    How very beautiful Michael:)

    Love does make us write passionate and yet tender verses, doesn't it?
    It is always nice to read through older verses of friends, just to see how they have evolved through time.
    I can see your verses were very beautiful from the very start:)
    I love your love poems more than the other ones, although they are very captivating as well.
    Bravo on this beauty:)

    (((Hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Wow very vived and wow well wrote if i had half the talant you did i would of finished my poem note book. wow. i love it it grate.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    I think this poem is beautiful and it's very touching! Great love poem! I sure will have to read more of your poems!
    ~Amy

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Brilliant poem like always!
    you are deffinately a good poet :)
    5/5 from me (again, haha)

    oh and btw thankyou for all of the great poem comments you have gave me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "Every syllable a mystery,
    Constructed in the stars.
    Ears can't comprehend
    Spanish strummed guitars."

    Good choice of wording, I can actually hear the guitars in my head.

    "My heart is your control."

    one of my favorite lines in the poem. Its sweet and simple but it would make any girl smile.

    "Brings me crystal tears"

    I've never heard tears being described this way, and its good that you did it this way it open my eyes to more descriptive words. Which is a great thing. Good job.

    "Distance is no consequence
    When your music is with me.
    Synchronizing, yet defining
    A higher love is always free."

    Many people can relate to this stanza which makes this stanza very powerful.

    "I'm a slave to your passion
    Oh, the words I yearn to scream."

    Good imagery again, powerful and original.

    "She speaks a perfect riddle
    To excite my inner core
    Teasing thoughts within me
    My mind is craving more!"

    Favorite stanza. Its simple but it just flows so well from each word. I like it. Its great.

    "So kiss me, mortal angel"

    I like the innocence and honesty in this line.

    Overall I liked this poem, its very descriptive, which makes it easy to see for each reader. Its a sweet poem and it can make anyone smile. Good work

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