Wow, Michael. I didn't knew you write so amazing love poems. Whew, if I would recieve this kind of love poems my heart would melt immediately...

Keep on writing MORE love poems, please.. :D

Hi Michael,

I love this lines;

So kiss me, mortal angel
Cement your words so true
Penetrate my every dream,
Blissful life of me and you.

Sing with me forever
Oh Lady grant this wish
Stand me in your heaven
Lets dance our endless kiss.

It was so sweet and I can feel the endless kisses. Very well written.

Pam

Awww, this poem just made my heart soar! I must read more of your work. This type of love poem just reaches the inner workings of love. 5/5 from me!

Oh my goodness!!! How people did not comment on this i will never understand. . . . . . . . its . . . . . .in lack of a better word......flawless. absolutely amazing. I especially love the lines "So kiss me, mortal angel" and "Stand me in your heaven
Lets dance our endless kiss." They imply such a love that goes deeper than an emotion ones body could feel. This is amazing.
a most enjoyable read
~*~Amber~*~

It's a pleasure to read this poem. A flawless write. Amazing poem!

Dude u have some of the best and most deepest rhymes... i give ur poem a 5

Perfectly and Beautifully written
I absolutely loved the vocabulary in this poem. Great usage of imagery also. You showed great voice in this also

"So kiss me, mortal angel
Cement your words so true
Penetrate my every dream,
Blissful life of me and you."
^^my fav stanza.

Overally amazing job
5/5

I have never read any better.

A beautifully penned piece. Good flow and imagery and excellent use of metaphors.

I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

Wow!
This is a fab poem hun!
Really good!

Love your work, as always, a pleasure to read!

5/5

Danielle
xx

Hope you're well

"Every syllable a mystery,
Constructed in the stars.
Ears can't comprehend
Spanish strummed guitars."

Good choice of wording, I can actually hear the guitars in my head.

"My heart is your control."

one of my favorite lines in the poem. Its sweet and simple but it would make any girl smile.

"Brings me crystal tears"

I've never heard tears being described this way, and its good that you did it this way it open my eyes to more descriptive words. Which is a great thing. Good job.

"Distance is no consequence
When your music is with me.
Synchronizing, yet defining
A higher love is always free."

Many people can relate to this stanza which makes this stanza very powerful.

"I'm a slave to your passion
Oh, the words I yearn to scream."

Good imagery again, powerful and original.

"She speaks a perfect riddle
To excite my inner core
Teasing thoughts within me
My mind is craving more!"

Favorite stanza. Its simple but it just flows so well from each word. I like it. Its great.

"So kiss me, mortal angel"

I like the innocence and honesty in this line.

Overall I liked this poem, its very descriptive, which makes it easy to see for each reader. Its a sweet poem and it can make anyone smile. Good work

Brilliant poem like always!
you are deffinately a good poet :)
5/5 from me (again, haha)

oh and btw thankyou for all of the great poem comments you have gave me :)

I think this poem is beautiful and it's very touching! Great love poem! I sure will have to read more of your poems!
~Amy

Wow very vived and wow well wrote if i had half the talant you did i would of finished my poem note book. wow. i love it it grate.

How very beautiful Michael:)

Love does make us write passionate and yet tender verses, doesn't it?
It is always nice to read through older verses of friends, just to see how they have evolved through time.
I can see your verses were very beautiful from the very start:)
I love your love poems more than the other ones, although they are very captivating as well.
Bravo on this beauty:)

(((Hugs)))

5/5 Ingrid