Wow, that was passionet

A very interesting, confusing, yet excellent poem.
Really liked it. I like how it jumps from one view to the other. Is this correct or am I interpreting it wrongly?? ;s

Very well done though.
Liked the fact that you barely rhymed.
Nice technique/style.
Keep it up <3
5/5

- Nicole xx

Excellent poem! Your a great writer!