by Cotton Candy Clouds Apr 18, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You're the one who broke it off. |
by Brittany C
The repetition was a little much. Try to change up the wording some. I still liked this poem. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing else wrong with the poem or that needed fixing. |
by Ingrid
So I said that I was truly and deeply sorry, |
by Kayl
I reallllly like this one, i felt entrapped in your words |
by MissMeg
Wow i love this so much. i can really relate to it like 100%. |
by Nawa
Niice one, well written. |