I love this one, well written and deeply integraded.

This was a very well written poem, I'm a guy and I've felt that way and probably made some females feel that way.

Aww!..great job!!!..very powerfull..i love the last 2 lines!...good job!
Aly

Very sweet:D
espacially
"hoped that you would never have to shed another tear "
LOve it
!!
:D

Very sweet:D
espacially
"hoped that you would never have to shed another tear "
LOve it
!!
:D

This is a nice poem i like it alot

This was a good poem. i no how it feels! good job expressing emotions!

Nice poem. I have just one thing to say: Your should be spelled you're. Other than that, it was good.

A well written & beautifully penned poem...5/5

Wow this was really deep!!....I gave you a 5

This is really great.good job.5/5
**harlea

This poem is so enlightening.
IT's stunning, 5/5

Niice one, well written.
5/5

Wow i love this so much. i can really relate to it like 100%.
well done girl
i love it
5/5

I reallllly like this one, i felt entrapped in your words

5/5

So I said that I was truly and deeply sorry,
but I will never again be your "baby."
That I finally found that someone that genuinly cares,
someone that doesn't just love me definitely maybe.

^^^Good on you, Tabi! Once a person treats you this way, it never changes. They make up and then turn away again and so on. It is not true love...It's a cruel game.

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

The repetition was a little much. Try to change up the wording some. I still liked this poem. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing else wrong with the poem or that needed fixing.