Good job....((if i comment now...well.not going to)) 5/5

This is good...i give you props for this poem...4/5

I love this poem very much, i think many can relate to it.
5/5

Ok. real comment time....

Overdosing on hope

^ if ever i OD on something..that would be what i would want it to be...because you can always recover..

Believing the dreams
Just like smoking dope
Hurts more than it heals
And your'RE wasting your time

^ no kidding...it feels like that a lot lately..

Put on a smiley face
Say that you are fine
And let people on their way
Brilliant lie
They walk away
They're better not knowing

^ it's funny how in school, they tell us..knowledge is the best way to fight drugs. so somebody tell me...what's the best way to fight aloneness?

great poem jesse...of course.

Wow. wen all hope is lost...wat is left 2 hold on2? sometimes it's better 2 have hope rather then just give up...that's the easy way out. well, great poem 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

p.s. where's the little quote at the bottom? i look forward 2 that!! >:l