See You In Hell

by Jodie Phillips   Apr 18, 2008


Your ignorance so bitter
Selfishness so clear,
Blatantly, I'm disregarded
The pain is so severe.

Your twisted words, so damaging
Heard often, theres no escape,
Embedded deep in my mind
Do you want this girl to break?

I don't understand your reasons
Leaving my mind so full of hate,
Mentally this is torture
My self esteem you try to sedate.

I'm trying to keep up the pace
I know I have to remain strong,
I will never believe I'm to blame
For everything in our life thats wrong.

I hope one day you'll feel the hurt
That you have instilled so deep in me,
When you do I hope it never subside's
I'll wait to see you in hell...Baby.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Great poem as they always are from you.
    The ending smacked me seriously. I didn't want it to end but the ... thing at the end was a nice touch ;) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Excellent write as always. I did something
    I never do and that was to read your comments of your poems. Its good that I'm
    not the only one that thinks your poem rule
    You def. have inside what it takes to be a
    true poet. What I mean is if I was'nt so
    f**k in the head then I would'nd have
    anything to write about and thats not the case with you I believe you could write about
    anything and it would be good. I FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WRITE. I always want more and
    I really don't like reading. especially long
    poems but if you wrote it I WOULD read it
    cause I KNOW I will like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    I know just how you feel my dad is like that.....you are sooo amazing keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    I don't understand your reasons
    Leaving my mind so full of hate,
    Mentally this is torture
    My self esteem you try to sedate.

    Liked this verse, thought ending was abrupt but maybe that was intentional

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