Devil's Game.

by Roxy   Apr 18, 2008


It's like screaming out for help when your about to die.
Left out in the darkness, no one hears your silent cry.
It's like reaching out for something,nothing's left to hold.
Clutching at the air,gasping,your blood runs deadly cold.

It's like hearing an angels voice,your worries disappear.
Though your heart is shattered and full of endless fear.
It's like wishing it was okay,You know it wont come true.
Knowing that your dead inside,Knowing that your you!

It's like smiling to yourself,you still believe there's hope.
Inside you are yelling cause' you know you can not cope.
It's like writing a suicidal letter for everyone to read.
Explaining that your letting go,your soul is to be freed.

It's a feeling only few have felt and you are one of few.
Feeling like there is no way out and nothing you can do.
It's a emotion you can't escape,the pain you seek wont fade.
The Devil has possessed you and his game you have played....

By Emily Lucas

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  • 14 years ago

    by mane

    Great work. i havent updated this in forever. but yea. myspace me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kitty

    Brilliant poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Okay I like this one
    it does hold special meanings, I think most of us felt this way at a time !
    I have to confess I'm in love with dark poems..so I loved yours a lot

    Just please change the "your" to "you're" because it really confuses the reader and this is not a slang poem, so don't use abbreviations, and the same thing with "cause"

    Great write though =]
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What an excellent poem it appeals to my dark side but it saddens me also that one as young as you feels the need to write a poem like this, although the poem is very well written with a lovely flow and structure it certainly shows that there is a lot more happening in the minds of our youth than many people seem to think.
    Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Very good last line!
    i love this poem! all through out it i was so curious! very well written and flowed nicely and the structure makes it easy to read.
    your poems are so damn good!
    i had read your latest, i forgot the title lol but it was your newest, i don't normally like love poems cuz they're soft and stuff but i liked that one!
    you really are a great writer!

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