O.o my god...totallly awesome!!!!!

WOW this was awesome I could feel the pain from every sentence.

This poem seems to discribe the way i feel and the way i know many others feel.

it is strong and so very meaningful. and will touch many a heart.

the way it flows almost gives off a relaxing reeling. it makes me open my eyes and see what is really there.

the feeling is powerful.

5/5

I love this very nice

Very good last line!
i love this poem! all through out it i was so curious! very well written and flowed nicely and the structure makes it easy to read.
your poems are so damn good!
i had read your latest, i forgot the title lol but it was your newest, i don't normally like love poems cuz they're soft and stuff but i liked that one!
you really are a great writer!

What an excellent poem it appeals to my dark side but it saddens me also that one as young as you feels the need to write a poem like this, although the poem is very well written with a lovely flow and structure it certainly shows that there is a lot more happening in the minds of our youth than many people seem to think.
Well done

Grant

Okay I like this one
it does hold special meanings, I think most of us felt this way at a time !
I have to confess I'm in love with dark poems..so I loved yours a lot

Just please change the "your" to "you're" because it really confuses the reader and this is not a slang poem, so don't use abbreviations, and the same thing with "cause"

Great write though =]
xx

Brilliant poem!

Great work. i havent updated this in forever. but yea. myspace me.