by Janalicious14 Apr 18, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Honey, |
by Freedom
I loved reading this poem!Totally amazing.And if its really what you feel-then you should be my soul mate,cause i also lost someone who was really precious to me...This poem goes to my fav list :) |
by ivan
GREAT!!! nice... |
It's really interesting but in stanza 8 you said sorry 2 times was it deliberate. I like the expression " smiling to apper strong". Keep it up. |
Wow this is amazing |
by Ash
A really deep felt and sincere write. Sorry are the only words that can be said and yet forgiveness makes one the greatest of people. I love the flow of this one and also the ease with which your words and lines seem to correlate with each other. Keep it up and thank you for the comment. 5/5 from my side |