Wow. I really like it!

The only thing I noticed...

Do not convince yourself to come
back for me when you know I am
already gone. This was a chance,
not a choice, predestined for a pawn.

If in that verse you changed...
"predestined for a pawn" "predestined to be a pawn" it'd flow much much better...
I hope you don't take that as a negative, or that I'm trying to correct you, just some helpful advice...
~Superman

This is a well written poem I liked it very much so go with the flow and keep it up / But on the downside: you might try this
Carry me no more
on words of false encouragement
continue with your entourage
and leave me to reckless abandonment
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on verse 4 after / some relief drop you choose down to the next line
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verse5
after passing glance drop we have down one line
--- verse 6
after broken lives , drop may you , down one line /
but then again i'm just a pair of eyes that still type with two fingers trying to share
my O C D
good poem keep it up

Thanx!