by thewritingwriter Apr 18, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Through these bones |
I like your use of words, it gave me a peaceful and natarul feeling that put a smile on my face, i like your way of thinking. |
by Sammerz
THis is a really good poem i think that mayb if you used a different structure it would make it a lil bit easier to follow...on the other hand job well done. |