Comments : Gravity and Harmony

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    THis is a really good poem i think that mayb if you used a different structure it would make it a lil bit easier to follow...on the other hand job well done.
    5/5
    Nice Job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Damned from the Holy

    I like your use of words, it gave me a peaceful and natarul feeling that put a smile on my face, i like your way of thinking.