PAINFUL!!

by Mister 47   Apr 18, 2008


Copyright (c) charbel jamous

**the sun is high ,
. another day is passing ,without you.
i wonder why ,
. i wake up from my sleeping , nothing new .**

just the way i hold you ,
. hold me once again ,
just the way you hold me ,
. REMEMBER ALL THIS PAIN...!!

i live a lie ,
. walking on the shores , of the sea
i wonder why ,
. my life is coming shorter, can it be?

and when the sun is sleeping
. drowning in the sea
i hold my heart in peaces ,
. it is PAINFUL CAN 'T YOU SEE?

* this poem i written specially for this contest and i have add music to it , remember to repeat the First paragraph market at first after every paragraph *

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  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    Fine ...
    but i wonder why i can't feel it
    may be it's much more as a song
    2,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tokin

    :) thank you, that meant alot to me. and i was thinking about that for the title, i just wasnt sure i was so pissed off when i wrote it haha..

  • 16 years ago

    by Tokin

    Thanks for the comments, I know you were trying to help me. Your works are good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Its really nice poem ! infact wonderful poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Breanne Willis

    Awesome... Very Good!