by Spiker 03 Apr 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
On September 11, 2001, terrorists attacked our nation, |
Also, In order to enlure your readers to read more of your poetry, choose a better Title, and a good topic line or sentence. Then you will receive more visits and comments. :) |
Not bad, I almost fell asleep, not really, lol, but it was okay all around so its worth a 5/5. Keep it up. |
by Spiker 03
Hey thanks! Its something I had to write for school. its called a ballad. I kinda bent the rules a lil' for it though. at first it was supposed to be about just an American soldier but it just kept going.lol. ty. |
Wow! that was intense, i liked the emotion, i can truthfully say that was sad... i couldnt imagine.where did u get this idea from?its very good! flow was good too... keep up the writting! 5/5 always ur friend |