For one thing, i LOVE the last stanza...definitely my favorite stanza..it's very beautiful. a calm after the storm..

You squeeze shut your eyes
And release a scream
Poet holds you, he's by your side
It was all a dream

Holding you in his arms
As tears roll down your face
Your bed, your poet, your glass room
You have found your place

^ i wish it was all a dream....wishes and more wishes...

great job, jesse..

You did awsome! you write good love poetry

Aww, great poem! luv the quote at the end! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~