Aww i love this..

..its seems to be not a poem..but it express your emotion vividly..love this one!keep writing..:)

This poem has everything that I would ask for in a love for

It says to me, do I have to give up being me to be loved by you

Having suffered through this dilemma myself I can really relate

The metaphors relating to Gods uconditional love is often compromised
This makes erotic love somewhat as painful as your poem reflects

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>