by Oracle Apr 19, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Yes, |
O.O I loved it. Very, very well written... and I have no idea, but I love all of your endings, LOL. They're brilliant and even more brilliantly expressed. I imagine reading a poem in a way the reader enjoys reading it... we cannot always read it the way the writer feels is recommended.... which sometimes sucks, because some of the readers prefer a second line... :) great job. 5/5 |