What I Want...

Awww!! </3 that is the most sweet but sad thing i've read so far!

I think it would be easier to read if you structure it better, cause having a big block makes it more annoying to read. plus, it sorta takes away the poetry-feel from this poem :S if that makes sense...

try setting it out like this:

You don't know how many memories i keep in my head about us.
Today when i ran out in front of your car, and begged you not to go...
I meant it.
I saw you smile,
I love to make you happy,
And when i do,
You do the same thing back.
You make me happy.

There are a thousand words i could say to you Of how i feel,
But i know you have another "one" in your life...
The thing is,
I don't care what you say,
I'm deeply in love with you,
but i don't know how to get out of this.
The gravity holds me down,
So powerful,
I'm going to be stuck in this rut for life.

I want to picture you taking my hand
And pulling me into your arms
Holding me...
But i can't seem to make it come true.
If there was anyway you could understand,
Don't keep me waiting
In the huge storm of tears.

All i want is to be with you forever, but that will only happen in my dreams.

5/5
~FountainsOfBlood