.... that was brilliant beyond words. I loved the words you used: "asphyxiation". A wonderful word I do think. :) I would give you a 50/50, but I can't. :( Just imagine I did, because I surely would!

"That body of yours,
frail as an immortal rose.
Never has a desire been acknowledged until now.
Random acts of kindness bring you closer,
driving away any sense in me."
I loved this stanza, it inspired me and reminded me a little bit of a poem I once written but deleted, sadly. :(
Keep writing, I loved this one. :) It's.... again, I'm speechless to this point.
5/5!

Take care. :)

Wow !! Once again a mystically penned piece by you...!!
5/5