Deeply touched

by June   Apr 19, 2008


Since finding courage to join this site ,
kind words from others give me conficence to write.
The words of others I am deeply touched by ,
there are people on here whom are so kind a tear I do cry.
It is a tear of happiness not of sadness ,
because so far I've been blessed to meet others filled with only kindness.
Writing is my hobby and a great writer I am not ,
the words I write are of whats happened to me and it may not seem alot.
For there are some on here who have been through so much ,
and when they write of what has been my heart their words do touch.
I am glad I did find the courage to join this site ,
as the friends I have made on here have given my life new light.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NEIL MUNRO

    We have and still do have similar problems, will always be about to listen to you as you will be for me i know that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Life is not so easy n ups n downz r there n so come unlimited desires, n also Good n Bad...

    N Once we know d difference between good n bad... Desires can cause us no harm.... n lean phase is just a matter of time... With efforts n strong fight... any war can be one... after all much of d time we r fighting with our selves, our inner selfs, our conscious rather than anyone or anything else....

    The path was always there, only we were distracted for a while, n wen we concentrate hard... We realize in our soul there is a GOD...

    N about this poem.... Itz fabulous n says a lot...... though thru said unsaid words, it speaks a lot...

    Good... Too good... I felt really good after reading this poem of ur's .... Cuz it was really different... Looked like it was written from d soul....

    Keep writing... Best wishz...

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    As we have talked, you know i feel the same way. with people all around me, i can sometimes feel so alone. being on here with friends like you allows me to escape for awhile. thanks

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