My eyes take in life
I witness it
I see it
I inhale it
The pain echos
Through my very soul
Ripping it
Tearing it
Shreding it
Somehow fueling my heart
This pain leaves
Through my fingertips
As love
My fingertips caress your face
Love against your cheek
Across your lips
Down your neck
I won't hurt you with my pain
I will turn my pain to love
Love agianst your cheek
Across your lips
Down your neck
Bleeding into your soul
I like the rythim to it. "I witness it
I see it
I inhale it
The pain echos
Through my very soul
Ripping it
Tearing it
Shreding it" that has a powerful message in it. and also "Love agianst your cheek
Across your lips
Down your neck
Bleeding into your soul" i can just feel it, now when i can feel your poem, that means your doin a good job. God bless you.