Broken to bits...

by Ash   Apr 19, 2008


Broken to bits and cold to the bone,
one mistake and you're left all alone.
Laughter and scornful faces that pry,
failure but in every attempt wherein you try.

Broken to bits and cold to the bone,
one mistake and you're left all alone.
Deserted by the one for whom love was declared,
and instantly tortures reveal of what once was shared.

Broken to bits and cold to the bone,
heartache and pain turned feelings to stone.
You could have realized that life is no dream,
you could've stopped walking into that illusion and wept the memories clean.

Broken to bits and cold to the bone,
you're all alone with nothing to hold,
one last word and it ended so quick,
your distant dreams echoing through darkness so thick,
you should have sworn to stay away,
and now in none shall you trust till eternal day...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    One mistake n u r left all alone... how true these words are..

    Lovely poem yet again..

    Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow I just couldn't stop reading this! It was really good. You deff have to keep writing.
    once again nice job. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by unknownlove

    I thought this was beautiful, very well written, i really felt it as i read it. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I really liked the repetition in this poem. I think it added to the emotion. Made me sad. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery here just blew me away and you expression of emotions was just flawless and effective in getting the message across. The flow was just great because everything fit in nicely with nothing seeming forced. The repitition was great and added strength .. power to the poem which made it even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

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