Unsure love

by Rachael   Apr 19, 2008


I love you so
but you'll never no
the love i feel inside for you
is the same you felt for me
you hide so far from the light
while im trying to help you fight to get you back
but you do not trust me
so why do i still lust for you when your still afraid of me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Really good
    but i think you need to break it up a little...maybe
    it also has a great idea and theme: you shoulda kept goin!!!!

    for a first poem, pretty good.

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this

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