Great poem, you have truly deep and powerful message within your words and you expressed your opinion with strong choice of vivid descriptions.
I like the originality and creativity of this piece, few lines actually really impressed me and overall I truly enjoyed. In first line of third stanza I think that you should write -someone- and not -some 1- and that left quite negative impression on me but still you did excellent job and I really think that you conveyed amazingly your opinion, you wrote interesting piece and kept my attention through each stanza.

Unable 2 even pay wat b due....

Marvellos poem, keep it up fren

best wishz... Karan