Wow. That was so heart-breaking and emotional, yet beautiful. Even when you are over come with emotion, you are an amazing writer. It is long, but you hold the reader's attention. The only thing that kind of ruined the flow is when some lines are shorter than other's. Definatly a 5/5. Simply amazing.
Hold on, Don't let the pain beat you,
Keep writing,
Rado

Wow , i like it soooo uch indeed i hope you include in a novel or somthing , ti would make a nice chapter.

i hope this is a imaginary thing and not personlay experiecen i dont imagine you handle all this for real