This is more of a poetic letter than a poem but I still like it.It is very emotional and sad, but anyone can tell you are truly sorry for hurting him with "A 5 month lie". Umm...I don't really know what else to say besides it was beautiful. A 5/5, as always =)
Keep writing,
Rado

Trully touching one ,
i love it , soo much , and althought it is sad

I liked it but it may have been a little long. maybe two or three poems could be born from this one. But overall it was good with lots of emotion and well chosen words. there is a saying that to be trusted is a greater compliment than to be loved. hopefully you will find a balance of both.