Loved it

Wonderful as always. It described a pain so deep, it hurts me just reading about it. But listen to me, This is NOT your fault! Don't ever think that. You do not over react and he loves you.I have no idea why he looks, but I do know how he looks at you. Don't let the pain overwhelm you, I will always be here to help you up when you fall.You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to read the next one, hopefully it's happier.
Keep writing,
Rado

I am fasinated , by it , i think pain jsut get out our best to write about ,

i love it every word of it hold somthing ,

great work

This is amazing! so deep i feel the pain wow! great write! 5/5