Comments : Broken promises are all I have...

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow this was just so heartbreaking to read because I could relate with the emotions you expressed. Your writing style is different and was refreshing to read something new on this site. The second stanza had to be my fave because you described everything so nicely that you had me hooked.

    "it's a door that remains open whenever I look behind."
    ^beautifully written line that just took my breath away.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow really amazing poem
    I can easily relate to this one
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LESBIAN KIZZEZ

    I love this one it is sad but wonderful it made me cry cause I can relate to it so much

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    SO sad n powerful poem.... Good one again

    Keep writing..

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa A Kessler

    You did a wonderful job of showing your readers your emotions instead of telling them. Keep up the good writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by katie99

    This is a good poem i can relate keep up the nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by heartachexxx

    I love this poem
    keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Allisha

    I looove this poem.
    It is amazing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Quniqwa

    This is a very good poem! This is my favorite one !

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, its great. It has a nice flow.