Can you ??

by mia   Apr 19, 2008


Can you hear my heart beats
which strongly beats only for you

can you see the love in my eyes
which glitters and shines whenever you pass by

can you feel the softness and beauty of my life
ever since you stepped in it

can you sense the coldness of my hands
whenever you hold them

can you look deep into my eyes
and see my ever lasting love that will never die

can you seek more in my heart
to find that you are the one i truly love and want

can you stand by my side
to complete whatever we started

can you be the only angel in the sky
that looks after me..
the angel that is always beside

can you be the brother, cousin, friend and husband
that can ever be

can you be the rest of the happiness
left in my whole entire life

can you let go of all your fears
and come back to me
because i and my life are in total need for you for real

can you just be the charming prince i want
and come back to where you belong
close here to me..

can you just be the person you hide inside
even if you are not so pure
even if you are not too good for me
even if .. even if.. i do not care about anyone but you
and i do not need anyone but you

because i love you the way you are
everything can be fixed, every bad thing in you can be improved

and if not.. so i like you the way you are my dude...

can't you just be real instead of being a dream?

can you...?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah

    Loveee it gurl! =)

  • 15 years ago

    by mia

    Thank you Brandi =) ,Dark savior and End of Eternity =)) thnx ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    You're poem is up and down. I think that you really have a lot of emotion behind this poem. There is a great deal of emotion in each and every word.

    This is a really great poem. I just feel that the syllables are up and down, you have a huge line coupled with a small line. I know that you do it as a release, just a little tidbit of information. Then you go from two lines to four, then two, then one. Just a little bit of 411 to help you improve.

    Awesome poem, I gave it a five, because it mirrors a lot of our thoughts.

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Dreams do come true, great write

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    Still he yets to hear you
    even when your screaming his name in the dead of night
    you wake up crying because after all it was just a dream
    thats me as well and i am so sorry if your going through even half of what im going through no it sdoesnt hurt it stings one bit at a time intel it eats you alive
    hi im Brandi nice to meet you

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