Trapped

by she   Apr 19, 2008


Tunneling deeper into a dark hole,
Where razors tease,
Knives taunt,
And blades sing their luring song.
Where darkness is all you see,
And darkness is what you soon become,
With no way out,
For these walls are to tall,
And the knives grip is just too strong.
You can't scream for your lips are sewn shut,
No way to show you're trapped,
But through hidden scars along your wrists,
In your blood you write along the walls
SOMEONE HELP
SOMEONE,PLEASE, PLEASE, HELP!
But NO ONE can see you're trapped
So trapped, you forever remain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You wont be trapped forever, great poem and strong title choice too xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Tunneling deeper into a dark hole,
    Where razors tease,
    Knives taunt,
    And blades sing their luring song

    omg!! thats just amazing, keep writing x

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Tunneling deeper into a dark hole,
    Where razors tease,
    Knives taunt,
    And blades sing their luring song

    ^^^ love that stanza. this was another one of ur greats. keep it up 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really deep and really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Where razors tease,
    Knives taunt,
    And blades sing their luring song.

    ^ definitely my favorite part in an amazing and relatable poem. the imagery was beautiful..sad and haunting, but beautiful, nonetheless.

    great job, sweetie.

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