Where razors tease,
Knives taunt,
And blades sing their luring song.

^ definitely my favorite part in an amazing and relatable poem. the imagery was beautiful..sad and haunting, but beautiful, nonetheless.

great job, sweetie.

Really deep and really good. 5/5

Tunneling deeper into a dark hole,
Where razors tease,
Knives taunt,
And blades sing their luring song

^^^ love that stanza. this was another one of ur greats. keep it up 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Tunneling deeper into a dark hole,
Where razors tease,
Knives taunt,
And blades sing their luring song

omg!! thats just amazing, keep writing x

You wont be trapped forever, great poem and strong title choice too xxx