Weird but good.
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I loved how this fit so nicely with each other. The flow was great and each word was full of meaning and strength. Well done it was a nice read. *5/5*

Wow... very unique... word choice is great... each word has a meaning and makes an impact.. great write..

Hey D,
This was a very unique short poem.
I loved it. Although, I think you should and more and add a little more detail.
Other than that!
Great!!!!!
Love ya! :)

-jazzy