by EssenceOfLace Apr 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A tear in the fabric of reality |
by Skyfire
I really liked the way you rhymed without sounding forced. Very lyrical. |
by Christopher Hantman
I really like the last line, |
by fearose
Another really relatable poem. I really like the rhyme scheme you have going here without it being 4-line stanzas like normal. This is truly really impressive. Even though it's a collab it seems as if it's one voice so excellent job with that. You have a way with words dear. 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
"A tear in the fabric of reality |
by jane
Just breath taking |