You write beautifully

Im speechless this poem was amazing

Wow! This reminds me of a person I lost two years ago. He didn't die, we just kind of drifted apart, but you're very good at expressing feelings. You've obviously had a lot of pain to be able to write this and I think you've got an exceptional talent. I can't critique this, because I don't see that it has any flaws, so good job! 5/5

Love the way you feel so passionate about what you are feeling, while you write. Its so awesome..

Truly amazing! Again... just the punctuation to help the reader figure out how to read it and get the rhythm. But, again... incredible! 5/5! <3

Pore genus

Love it

In the end in i love this title i love the flow of the poem :)