Questions I Can Never Ask

by Dawn aka Dominique   Apr 20, 2008


How come you never called me back?
Were you to busy?
Was it time you lacked?

Why do you not have faith in me and him?
Is it because of what happened way back when?
Why can't you just make that thought like a fish and swim?

Why didn't you just preach your thoughts to my face?
Did you not know it would come back to me?
Why'd you spaz at him for you feeling jealous and replaced?

Since when do tell my biz to the world?
And put the blame on someone else?
Did you not know I didn't want anyone to know I was his girl?

Do you ever think about my feelings when you say what you say?
Does it ever cross your mind?
To say, Dominique are you okay?

Are you wondering why I doubt you the way I do?
Have you seen your past?
Why I can't trust you like I use to be to?

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  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    I really like this one:)
    I thought the flow of it was really good.
    I know what you mean to.
    good job :)
    And thanks for commenting on my poem "stunning" a while ago,im sorry it took so long to return the favor.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Another good piece from you...
    so much emotion is hidden beneath those lines... Sadness ,anger and desperation ... all these feelings are visible in your poem..

    great one..
    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing poem. Could feel mixed emotions of anger, love, dissapointment, a bit of sadness. I really loved that.
    Also, I loved how strongly your character was in the poem, and the way you put your name in it, made it even stronger.
    I got a feeling your friend was jelouse, but I'm not a person to judge and don't know the whole package.
    Easy to relate to!
    I found it brilliant, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Well written.. u hav a unique way of expressing urself in a poem... very well done! =D
    i like the question form.. i do that too.. hehe

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Honestly its a cute poem, but i really didnt like the questionsy form, but i liked what it said...good job hun!
    Aly

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