by Dennis Apr 20, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
Noisy crowded buses run |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent word choice and flow in this one. Very nicely done!!! |
I'm new here, and have never lived in the city. But this poem makes me feel like I have actually experienced it. Profound, sensitive, all things that are worthwhile are in this poem...I did love it. |
by C P Sharma
The rhytm and diction reminds me of W. H. Auden's: 'The Night Mail". You have portayed an impressive side of city life not taking much dig at it. A very good poem. I specialyy appreciate: |
by Diana
This brings back many memories for me, most of them not so good. I miss the variety of places to go and things to do, but I'll never again live in a big city. I love the country and the feeling of security :) |
by guitarman
Wonderfully wriiten piece here, can almost hear the city breathing as I read it! |