Without you

by NaC   Apr 20, 2008


When your not by my side
everything just seems so gray
when you left me i just died
and my mind just set astray
nothing had a point
nothing had a reason
nothing made sense
nothing worked.
I'm sorry i lied.
I'm sorry i hurt you
I'm sorry i didn't do the right thing
I'm sorry, sorry for everything
you let me feel such deep a love
you fitted me like a glove
i needed you then and now.
I'm so sorry that i was a cow.
i don't know what else to say.
just so u know i think of you every day
every second. every chance.
i would cheer of u gave me another glance
without you.... I'm incomplete

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Really good!
    I liked the changes and repititions. I think that you were grasping with a couple of the words but they still fit and it's still very good. It flows and is very emotive.

    Just a nit-pick with a typo u might /(or might not) want to change:

    every second. every chance.
    i would cheer of u gave me another glance
    ^^should be "if"

    Well done.
    Aish
    xx

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