by White Chocolate Dynamite Apr 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
How can I tell you I love you? |
by Melpomene
First of all. I like that you've tried a different style. Sonnets are beautiful, and even more beautiful to write so well done on this. |
My normal words don't even do this justice. All too many times I've felt a burning love and been to selfconscience to speak it. This is the biggest fear/problem in a growing relationship. I loved this poem. It took my breath away... |
Hey I wrote a sonnet. But i love this poem. |
Hey Nathan.... OMW awww i so totally loved this wirte its very different than any other poem ive read, sry i didnt take the time to read what other ppl had to say (who cares about the critics) i absolutely loved it!!! i think u did very good it was so touching i just hoped u shared this with Ali... 5/5 always |
by Spiker 03
Hey! This was a great poem. dont listen to the ppl that critique your work. their just jealous they cant write like that. I'm glad you can show your emotions and your not afraid to do that. keep up the good work. 5/5~Spiker_03~lil' sis. |