Wow...
The repetition of the first stanza at the end with the twist in the last line is truly effective. I haven't expected that kind of ending but it truly left me in awe. I like the whole message of this poem and I think that you truly portrayed the imagery in every stanza greatly. I like the details through the whole poem. You pulled me in right from the first line and kept my attention with captivating imagery and very profound stanzas. The only thing I don't like about the poem is that you repeated the word "my" too many times so that ruined the flow a bit.
Overall, this is another great poem from you.
My favorite stanza is the first one, it is really captivating.

Keep up!