Comments : Do you have remorse?

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This seemed like a very angry poem.
    The rhymes seemed a little forced.
    But overall I enjoyed the read. The story behind it is not a good thing, but the fact that you were able to let your feelings out in it, was good.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by azurelady

    Understanding the context a little more from PM's, I get this one completely. There is a lot of perceived venom, though total restraint was pretty much in hand. You made your feelings clear as day, and it read beautifully for me. Great job again!!! 5/5!!! ~Anita

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked what the piece was about, and it was very well written, but I didn't like the first stanza only because every line rhymed, and it, in a weird way, meddled with the flow, but each line itself, or as couplets were great.