This seemed like a very angry poem. |
by azurelady
Understanding the context a little more from PM's, I get this one completely. There is a lot of perceived venom, though total restraint was pretty much in hand. You made your feelings clear as day, and it read beautifully for me. Great job again!!! 5/5!!! ~Anita |
I liked what the piece was about, and it was very well written, but I didn't like the first stanza only because every line rhymed, and it, in a weird way, meddled with the flow, but each line itself, or as couplets were great. |