Too Late

by Sweet Disposition   Apr 20, 2008


Lately, things haven't been the same
I know I've been different,
I know I'm to blame

There's been so many thoughts
Whirling round in my head
Too many secrets,
And words left unsaid

I've blocked you right out,
Not letting you through..
When really,
The reason I'm breathing is you

Now I'm done with the thinking,
With making you wait
Say you still want me,
That it's not too late..

28/1/08

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful write!
    you did a wonderful job of expressing yerself.

    I've blocked you right out,
    Not letting you through..
    When really,
    The reason I'm breathing is you

    those are my favorite lines, they really caught my attention the most.
    keep up the nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece was okay, I thought. I didn't like that the first stanza was smaller than the rest, I just didn't see any reason for it. I could feel the regret and desperation, your emotions came through well. My favorite line was 'And words left unsaid'.

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Awesome!! I can relate..!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Desiree

    I love it!
    Reminds me of myself at time!
    Good job:)

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