I love it!
Reminds me of myself at time!
Good job:)

Awesome!! I can relate..!! 5/5

This piece was okay, I thought. I didn't like that the first stanza was smaller than the rest, I just didn't see any reason for it. I could feel the regret and desperation, your emotions came through well. My favorite line was 'And words left unsaid'.

A beautiful write!
you did a wonderful job of expressing yerself.

I've blocked you right out,
Not letting you through..
When really,
The reason I'm breathing is you

those are my favorite lines, they really caught my attention the most.
keep up the nice work!