Thriving On My Heartache

by Sweet Disposition   Apr 20, 2008


He suffocates me with a feeling
So powerful and strong,
A burning passion, deep inside me
Screaming out that he is wrong

His eyes stab at my fiery soul
An ache, creating pain
My heart melts swiftly, 'cause I know,
It will always be this way

He's a lost, controlling monster
Who thrives on my heartache
To the world he is an angel
Only I know he's a fake

His actions are to spite me,
Too many times I have been burned
But his coldness made me stronger,
Yet another lesson learned

If I tear apart the reasons,
And analyse the view
I can see why daddy's like this;
Because I never have loved you

18th April 2008 *

Really not my best but I got angry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Nice one n_n

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Idk why u said this wasn't one of your best. I think it's up there. Great job the flow, and word choice was superb.

    His actions are to spite me,
    Too many times I have been burned
    But his coldness made me stronger,
    Yet another lesson learned

    ^^^^my favorite stanza. wonderful job. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    It had a nice flow about it, and the rhymes were okay, but nothing really seemed to jump out to me. However, I do believe that the third and forth stanzas were the best, they had the most amount of power, like 'controlling monster', 'Only I know he's a fake', 'His actions are to spite me' and 'But his coldness made me stronger'.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    This poem like explains me <3

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